I NEED THAT COLI CRITIQUE !!!

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My 16 year old cousin is starting to make me a believer.

Second Verse :banderas:

Solo Track :whew:



This is him and my 17 year old cousin :sas2:


Solo : Only song with a hook :whoo:
 
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That "elimination chamber" beat completely outshined him...The beat is perfect for Roc Marciano...Not Odd Future type rapping...

'Technically' he is a good rapper...But I prefer rappers with that "special sauce"...Dude sounds like he is on top of the beats, and not one with with the beats...It could be just a mix thing...

He is not the kind of rapper I would listen to, but I can hear other people liking him his stuff...
 

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sounds pretty good lyrically...way too much punch-ins for my tastes. and yeah, the mixing is a problem cuz him and his beats are fighting with each other instead of working together. it's actually really fukking annoying, cleaning that up would a long way.

i guess he could have a lane on some "underground/indie/blogger" type of shyt.
 
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I agree with the mixing. Him and his high school friends are doing it themselves trying to learn. I plan on finding a person to take over that part.

I feel he is still going through that lyrical exercise stage, im hoping by the time he graduates he can find himself .
 

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:ehh: not bad, needs to fine tune some things. He needs to stay from the type of production on snakes though, didn't fit imo.

make sure he keeps writing everyday also
 

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:ehh: not bad, needs to fine tune some things. He needs to stay from the type of production on snakes though, didn't fit imo.

make sure he keeps writing everyday also
 
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