Yo, this is nice broham... you can definitely spit... remind me of Kool G Rap a bit, rapid fire flow...
You may want to consider not doubling/tripling the entire verse; when the chorus comes in it doesn't have that "build-up" because your vocals are all mixed at the exact same volume.
With that being said, the chorus is hype, good shyt... what do you use to record?
You got skills broham
I run a rap coaching/mixing tutorial company, you may want to check us out YouTube.com/HowToRapDrew and see if it's up your alley, pause
Also feel free to me up
HowToDrew@gmail.com and we can build.