Guys, Judge my Music video (A bunch of hot girls in it!)

C-Styles

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I did a song that questions temptation around me and the people with mask are suppose to represent sin and everything, this is the second single to my upcoming album, let me know what you guys think, i accept critique nicely! :win:



C-Styles - Falling Apart ft. Irish (Official Video) - YouTube


[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umh-GuJ3hpg"]C-Styles - Falling Apart ft. Irish (Official Video) - YouTube[/ame]
 

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this type of music won't be well receive on The Coli

with that say, do what make you happy
 

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I did a song that questions temptation around me and the people with mask are suppose to represent sin and everything, this is the second single to my upcoming album, let me know what you guys think, i accept critique nicely! :win:



C-Styles - Falling Apart ft. Irish (Official Video) - YouTube


C-Styles - Falling Apart ft. Irish (Official Video) - YouTube

:ld: Not my cup o' tea, but do you Ronnie!!
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I only got to 0:42 because I found the beat to be wack.

Neon Gold needs to put some funk in it.
 

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Every area of this needs a lot of work. Thats me trying to be objective.
 

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Yeah.. No hate/ but you've got some ground to catch up on before trying to make any moves professionally. I made it about 2 minutes deep.

You seem like you havent really found your own lane/style that you could sit comfortable in. And that applies both sonically and seeing you physically within the song/video.
 

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sidebar: There is already a C-Style and a Li'l C-Style, so you might wanna switch up the moniker...
 
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