Do I Have What it takes. To be famous ?

[KingJames6]

Rate my flow, lyricism and delivery

 

[str8up]

breh u really playing the beat through the mic

 

[KingJames6]

breh u really playing the beat through the mic

just started rapping.. trying to see if i have what it takes. What you think of the lyricism ?

 

[str8up]

just started rapping.. trying to see if i have what it takes. What you think of the lyricism ?

It's not bad but kind of corny and you not really saying much. But you said it's a freestyle so if you want an opinion of your lyricism then write something.

 

[KingJames6]

It's not bad but kind of corny and you not really saying much. But you said it's a freestyle so if you want an opinion of your lyricism then write something.

i wrote both of those verses

 

[str8up]

i wrote both of those verses

Try to take your time and write something then get better quality and we can judge better

 

[mortuus est]

You can do it breh, where u from, the south? u gon be famous

 

[KingJames6]

You can do it breh, where u from, the south? u gon be famous

Born in the south but ive lived in the DMV most of my life

 

[KingJames6]

New freestyle