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[Broke Wave]

Not bad breh, if you and your partna had memorized the lines, and just cooled down the over-acting, would have been better. Good stuff though I like the way you projected. I think you shoulda built up to the passionate parts you know? Instead of just being passionate every line.

Good shyt though

 

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