Check it brehs. First time gettin on this rappin ****

[Vagina Thief]

Joint Produced by myself.

Got first verse. My other two homies on the second and thirds.

Give me some feedback

[ame=http://soundcloud.com/producedbymetro/we-gone-faded-metro-dleon]We Gone (Faded) - Metro dLeon, Jayes, Fresh by dLeon__ on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free[/ame]​

 

[LauderdaleBoss]

Joint Produced by myself.

Got first verse. My other two homies on the second and thirds.

Give me some feedback

We Gone (Faded) - Metro dLeon, Jayes, Fresh by dLeon__ on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free​

Real Talk, I hardly ever feel the music that nikkas post up so I don't comment cuz I don't wanna come off as some hating ass nikka but.....

I actually liked this track. Love the beat too. Everybody did they thing. Nobody sounded wack. Nobody came with one of those nerdy ass uncharismatic voices that you hear a lot of online rappers have. shyt was on point to me. I liked the chorus as well. Props breh.

Only thing I'd say that you can do to make the track better. Is to rap harder, like spit with more feeling.

So how about letting a nikka get on that remix

 

[Rominati]

Im feelin it. Kinda Asap Rockyish with that flow.


What sample you use? shyt funky . My suggestion is to add a lil bass to the track. That could really make the track come alive. Either drop a bassline or add some 808s.

 

[Vagina Thief]

Real Talk, I hardly ever feel the music that nikkas post up so I don't comment cuz I don't wanna come off as some hating ass nikka but.....

I actually liked this track. Love the beat too. Everybody did they thing. Nobody sounded wack. Nobody came with one of those nerdy ass uncharismatic voices that you hear a lot of online rappers have. shyt was on point to me. I liked the chorus as well. Props breh.

Only thing I'd say that you can do to make the track better. Is to rap harder, like spit with more feeling.

So how about letting a nikka get on that remix

THanks breh I appreciate the feedback

I agree with you on spitting it with more feeling mind you it's my first time getting on a track ... Pm me some of your work ​

Im feelin it. Kinda Asap Rockyish with that flow.


What sample you use? shyt funky . My suggestion is to add a lil bass to the track. That could really make the track come alive. Either drop a bassline or add some 808s.

Gil Scott Heron

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[Vagina Thief]

Upping this. Hoping to get more feedback from my Coli brehs..

daps n reps​

 

[StillTrillMatic]

Beat is nice and everybody came correct, Good shyt