Lyricism in the making. Its only the beginning. Check me out and leave some feedback fam
AND MY BEATS TOO
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Lyricism in the making. Its only the beginning. Check me out and leave some feedback fam
AND MY BEATS TOO
https://soundcloud.com/fleezy_beats
Coherent
Rookie
Let's make this clear... Braggin about yourself in metaphor is not lyrical 
Beat's are pretty dope though. As a rapper, you're not bad, solid flow, but nothing I would care to listen to on a regular basis. You need more substance bro!
Beat's are pretty dope though. As a rapper, you're not bad, solid flow, but nothing I would care to listen to on a regular basis. You need more substance bro!
Let's make this clear... Braggin about yourself in metaphor is not lyrical
Beat's are pretty dope though. As a rapper, you're not bad, solid flow, but nothing I would care to listen to on a regular basis. You need more substance bro!
thanks for the feedback fam
Vice Gripp
Rookie
Peeped the Believe It Freestyle and the I Do Too track.
Ya ish is aiite the quality is koo the beats were straight. I think the bars could be better there was a couple clever lines and I can tell you puttin focus on ya lyrics, but like Coherent said the substance and direction needs more cohesion. I would say really try and work on your delivery, feelin the lines as you saying them and adjusting your tone to fit what you saying more. Being more expressive in ya ish ya dig??
Keep elevating homie.
Ya ish is aiite the quality is koo the beats were straight. I think the bars could be better there was a couple clever lines and I can tell you puttin focus on ya lyrics, but like Coherent said the substance and direction needs more cohesion. I would say really try and work on your delivery, feelin the lines as you saying them and adjusting your tone to fit what you saying more. Being more expressive in ya ish ya dig??
Keep elevating homie.
Axum Ezana
Driving in the fast lane
you alright man. keep getting better.
Let's make this clear... Braggin about yourself in metaphor is not lyrical
Beat's are pretty dope though. As a rapper, you're not bad, solid flow, but nothing I would care to listen to on a regular basis. You need more substance bro!
thanks for the feedback fam
appreciate it g!!!
