dangerranger
All Star
Hey Brehs,
I finally finished my Before Dawn pilot script and I am looking for a test audience to get feedback from. I'm often in this section anyways and I see how we agree and disagree on certain movies and shows so y'all would be my best first test audience. Essentially, this script is a political action drama with superhero elements to it. I've played around with the following logline for this show:
A politician and his teenage son try to save their dying city but on opposite sides of the law.
If you're interested you can PM me for the pdf. It's 68 pages long and I'm just looking for feedback because building a following for this concept online is my utmost priority before I try to shop it around. I'll post this in the screenwriting thread but I'm not sure who else goes in there so I started my own thread for this.
I finally finished my Before Dawn pilot script and I am looking for a test audience to get feedback from. I'm often in this section anyways and I see how we agree and disagree on certain movies and shows so y'all would be my best first test audience. Essentially, this script is a political action drama with superhero elements to it. I've played around with the following logline for this show:
A politician and his teenage son try to save their dying city but on opposite sides of the law.
If you're interested you can PM me for the pdf. It's 68 pages long and I'm just looking for feedback because building a following for this concept online is my utmost priority before I try to shop it around. I'll post this in the screenwriting thread but I'm not sure who else goes in there so I started my own thread for this.