Anybody in the mood to critique a song???

[CapFromMCU]

New vibe for me.. Positive and Negative feedback welcome, i got alligator skin b..

Blessings..


[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9onGw6A4VDU"]"Yesterday's rain...Today's sun" - K Pryme - YouTube[/ame]

 

[Pool_Shark]

Beat is flames, like the lyrics and concept. Your flow was cool. If I had to give it one critique it would be that sometimes it sounded like you needed to loosen up a bit. It's trip though cause then a few bars later you sounded cocky. Why'd you censor dikk?

 

[GreenGrass]

you have mp3 of this? put it up on soundcloud. song is piff...

 

[CapFromMCU]

you have mp3 of this? put it up on soundcloud. song is piff...

no doubt.. blessings my dude

 

[CapFromMCU]

Beat is flames, like the lyrics and concept. Your flow was cool. If I had to give it one critique it would be that sometimes it sounded like you needed to loosen up a bit. It's trip though cause then a few bars later you sounded cocky. Why'd you censor dikk?

loosen up?? haha, what you mean slime? elaborate, i'm curious.. i appreciate it, salute. i didn't do it, my cousin did, i told him to take out the bad words, i probably would have left d!ck *pause*

 

[GreenGrass]

what song you sampled? song is piff. i can easily burn a jay to this. damn.

 

[CapFromMCU]

what song you sampled? song is piff. i can easily burn a jay to this. damn.

i don't even know.. she did the beat and hook tho, cool chick..

https://www.facebook.com/joeyclaris.aquila?fref=ts

 

[shakobe]

Awful lyrics corny beat don't quit your day job

 

[CapFromMCU]

Awful lyrics corny beat don't quit your day job

peace and blessings my nig

 

[hustlemania]

this is terrible..

 

[The Jewnited States]

the next silk tha shocker




do ya thing breh