A new track I did for the guys working that 9 to 5

[observe]

 

[Aje]

Can't lie, this reminded me of that, "I wish I was a little bit taller" track from back in the day. But I actually like this. I played it three times. My only critique would be change the ending by adding the vocal sample or something. It ends too empty-like.

Good work.

 

[observe]

Can't lie, this reminded me of that, "I wish I was a little bit taller" track from back in the day. But I actually like this. I played it three times. My only critique would be change the ending by adding the vocal sample or something. It ends too empty-like.

Good work.

Thanks....yeah my boy was gonna add some vocals at the end..he told me that a few days ago..check the song again,.my vocals are tweeked..sounds better

 

[mortuus est]

powerful

 

[Why-Fi]

this is dope

 

[TEKBEATZ]

this is nice

 

[ryshy]

its straight, i really like the keys and percussion in the background, only issue is that its not exceptionally good and theres not much progression in terms of song structure

 

[dora_da_destroyer]

you definitely got that heiro flow on this...words (or at least their delivery) could benefit from a better structure/flow in some places, but it definitely fits the vibe you were going for