4 new tracks y'all! We havin' Fun out here!

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1st beat is a dope sample flip of funking for Jamaica, but I feel like its just the skeleton of the beat. Like it's missing some more sauce.

2nd beat is dope, but you gotta replace that one cheesy sound in the melody. Make it a piano or some type of dark organ and the beat becomes darker and better immediately imo

3rd beat, you pump faking and adding too much shyt to an already dope beat. Get rid of that loud ass light hitting ticker sounding instrument. it clashes with the dope melody you got going on. I love the transitions, but you gotta take that one sound out or replace it with something that doesn't clash so much. beat is dope tho. just give it an intro too.

4th beat, nice lil subtle sample flip for the main melody. beat is nice. wouldn't change anything

overall good shyt breh.
 

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1st beat is a dope sample flip of funking for Jamaica, but I feel like its just the skeleton of the beat. Like it's missing some more sauce.

2nd beat is dope, but you gotta replace that one cheesy sound in the melody. Make it a piano or some type of dark organ and the beat becomes darker and better immediately imo

3rd beat, you pump faking and adding too much shyt to an already dope beat. Get rid of that loud ass light hitting ticker sounding instrument. it clashes with the dope melody you got going on. I love the transitions, but you gotta take that one sound out or replace it with something that doesn't clash so much. beat is dope tho. just give it an intro too.

4th beat, nice lil subtle sample flip for the main melody. beat is nice. wouldn't change anything

overall good shyt breh.
I really appreciate your break downs ALL the time my dude :salute: I feel EVERYTHING you said and it's pretty much what I felt about each. I'm going to adjust accordingly. I also am almost complete with a full version of that We R One for you breh...come up with a concept for a track for it :myman:
 

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I really appreciate your break downs ALL the time my dude :salute: I feel EVERYTHING you said and it's pretty much what I felt about each. I'm going to adjust accordingly. I also am almost complete with a full version of that We R One for you breh...come up with a concept for a track for it :myman:

thanks breh no problem.

I enjoy listening to dope beats.

Concept is easy. We R One.....black togetherness and progressiveness. We can rap about that.
 
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